Things that needed to be tweaked in Final Cut

So after showing it to Mr Earl, and a few of my fellow students, and gathered the following points that need to be tweaked;

1. Firstly, I didn't notice this, nor did alot of people till a few Bus enthusiasts pointed out to me that the buses aren't actually the same! However, there is nothign i can really do now, however, the clips jump ahead of each other, so he could of got different buses to his destination.

2. The Snow doesn't seem to be continuous, however the passage of time could say that the snow is changing with the time.

3. Titles need to be added, but thats obvious

4. Intro sequence needs adding with the publishers etc.

5. Complaints that the audio transitions when Ben takes his headphones off is too harsh, need to make it smoother.

6. Need to add more contrast and some sort of grain filter to the clips, to give them a more 'Film' quality look to it.

7. Some of the shots aren't quite on time witht he music and need trimming ever so slightly.